Sunday, April 12, 2015

How can I write a persuasive essay on this question: Why should teenagers not get piercings or tattoos? Thanks.

When writing an argumentative or persuasive essay, it is important to clearly state an opinion and then support it with reasons and evidence.


In arranging the essay, there should be an introduction, body, and conclusion:


  • Introduction

--Give some background information so that readers understand the issue (explain that many teens nowadays get tattoos or piercings and why)


--Present the opinion statement:
e.g.Teens should avoid getting piercings and tattoos because the tattoos cannot be removed without pain and expense, and they and piercings can prevent opportunities for employment later on.  


Provide reasons and supporting evidence. (Give at least 3 reasons that support the opinion statement. 
Here are the types of evidence:


  1. Case studies - Examples from research

  2. Commonly accepted beliefs - Ideas shared by many people

  3. Examples - Illustrations or specific examples of a general idea

  4. Facts - Statements that can be proven

  5. Anecdotes - Stories or personal examples that illustrate a point

Examples:


1. One case study that has been done comes from Salary.com:


  • 76% of respondents feel tattoos and piercings hurt an applicant’s chances of being hired during a job interview.

  • 39% of those surveyed believe employees with tattoos and piercings reflect poorly on their employers.

  • 42% feel visible tattoos are always inappropriate at work,

  • 55% reporting the same thing about body piercings.

5. One example of someone who regrets getting tattoos is a fortyish woman who got the tattoos when she was a teen. Imogene states that even her daughter thinks they are "rubbish." 


(http://www.dailymail.co.uk/femail/article-2349091/Warn-teen-Theyll-regret-tattoo--just-like-me.html)


In order for your essay to be its most persuasive, it should be organized so it is written smoothly and logically. Since readers usually recall ideas presented at the end, putting the strongest arguments at the end is a good way to organize. Do not forget to elaborate on reasons so that they appeal to the reader's logic, emotion, or ethics. Be certain that the appeals are balanced and not one-sided.


  • Conclusion

--Restate your opinion


--Summarize the reasons.

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